Encore
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Post by Encore on Mar 13, 2008 19:09:05 GMT -8
Okays... a note; by no means am I a professional at photo manip. Really just a beginner, but still find it fun to play with the program and such.
**I know its a tad wide**
Anyways, I know the horse's head looks odd. The cutting is fine, its just it and the background don't blend well. Anywhoo, it doesn't 'click' for me so it doesn't work. But my question is;;
What does it need work on?
Please, any input ya'll have would be very helpful and appreciated Constructive criticism would be awesome, just don't be too cruel *puppy face*.
Let me know! --> endless[/color]
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Post by King Charlemagne on Mar 13, 2008 19:59:18 GMT -8
Hmm, it does look slightly off. It seems to me that this picture could use more blending, especially in the picture of the horse. Also, I would consider using a horse of a different color, such as a gray or an albino, but over all you did a good job.
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Post by Encore on Mar 13, 2008 20:19:24 GMT -8
Thanks. Ya, a lighter horse would work better. but it has to be this horse, and this particular photo, lol. but here; I've made a few adjustments... tell me if it improves it. Also, don't know if it's like it on ya'lls computer. but for me, its a bit 'foggy' or blurry around the words in the picture. only when I post it does it seem to do it. ah well
**made smaller[/size]
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Post by Crimson Flower on Mar 13, 2008 20:21:30 GMT -8
Yeah, I think it looks better against the water now, but something about the sand doesn't seem right. I can't quite place it though. >.< -dies-
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Post by Encore on Mar 13, 2008 20:22:28 GMT -8
**by adjustments, I blurred it a bit and put a yellow *cantthinkoftheword* over it so 'warm it up'**
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Post by Encore on Mar 13, 2008 20:24:44 GMT -8
It's her tail *light comes on*. Her feet look like they are stepping in the sand -though could be better- but her tail just floats on top! I need to change that. How?I'll think of it tomorrow, lol.
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Post by Sheik of the Sultan on Mar 13, 2008 20:42:44 GMT -8
Maybe if you moved her down so that she is standing on the very base of the picture.
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Post by Encore on Mar 15, 2008 19:53:21 GMT -8
Thanks for all your input guys! Really appreciate it. And could you do the same for this one?
Sorry if I seem overbearing or whatever, but at least this is something to do right? lol[/color]
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Post by A Mocking Bird on Mar 15, 2008 21:25:25 GMT -8
The top words are a bit much, maybe a bit smaller, and um maybe change the font a bit... Other then that it looks really good, it took me awhile to find any constructive critisism.(Bleh, ya, i spelled that wrong)
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Post by Encore on Mar 15, 2008 21:38:59 GMT -8
Thanks ^^ a note;; this was an impulsive creation, lol. a site I play at [seminole winds] my character [Kalanu] is the lord or whatever of this place, and so wanted to make its own picture. it would maybe just be one of the pictures above the sub-boards and posts within a board. random, I know. What do you mean, change the font 'a bit'? Like, a whole new font, or italicized -spelt wrong-, bolded... what? lol, and which font? the main or the sub ones?
Sorry I so strange. Just leaving tomorrow and want to post :nuts:
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Post by A Mocking Bird on Mar 16, 2008 11:48:17 GMT -8
Sorry, i guess i wasn't too clear was I... I would change the font on the words at the top, its just a bit over powering, i would use somthing sumilar, but not the same.
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Post by Thunder Knight on Mar 16, 2008 19:14:08 GMT -8
Love it, though it forces the eyes to take a minute to firgure out what it is.
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